Jumat, 12 Februari 2010

My Favorite Place













Tray guest this place guys!!


I think it's simple one for you to guest my favorite place.....


In here, I'm going to describe my most favorite place.

This place is very accessible, located near the campus; it’s about 700 metres or only four minutes away on foot from the Campus. You can find it easily. If you ever
see an apartment nearby the campus then you will soon find it.
This place is like a flat. It’s a single building consists of 5 rooms and has a shop selling the basic needs of the dweller. The all 5 rooms are rented for US$ 250 each per month or US$ 3.000.000 per year. Every room is 4 x 2 metres at large. The facilities gotten are unlimited electricity power, a free laundry service, and a spacious room, three litres mineral water per day, a guest room, and a computerized safety-system.

My friend rented the room number 2. It is in front of the living room. There is a small rug in front of the door. He has lived there for three years and He has many things inside his room. In his bright, spacious, and colourful room painted it white, violet, and green), you can find a big cubism painting that it bought in an auction hung on the wall near the door. From the wide window, you can enjoy the freshness of the potted ornamental plants at the terrace.

This place is has a desk against the wall at the room corner. There he placed an antique beautiful table lamp, a classic table-clock, a small mirror, and a personal computer. Under the desk, it sets up a well-branded active speaker. There’s a wood chair behind the desk. In the right side of the desk, you can find a bookshelf full of literature books, various kinds of reliable dictionary, scientific books and education-journals. This room or place has a big spring bed in front of the desk. And cupboard is beside the bed. On the wall, opposite the wall where it hang the painting, he gotten several posters of football collection; artist and some pictures of animal. This place is not only comportable but also peaceful


That’s all the description of my favorite place
guys..

Come on.... guest it guy..!






2 komentar:

  1. Nice writing, Brian.
    It's better for you to pay attention for each paragraph.
    You have to remind the structure of paragraph.
    Don't forget to put the topic sentence and clincher.

    alright, is this lecture miss marni?
    Am I right?

    BalasHapus
  2. Yes..I get it..Do you have any indication to me to writting a good paragraph??

    BalasHapus